May 11, 2012

Time to correct

Ok hello again, in this time I must be corrected a post of my classmate Tamra. So this is the post:

“Hi, I will talk about one of my favorite web sites, which is You Tube (we), and I have this site in my telephone like direct acces (ww), because in these web sites, I can see videos, all videos (p)(this sentence is strange, I can’t understand very well what she like to said). When I had Facebook, I know You Tube too, and since that (ww(this)) moment I have can (we) see much video ( I don’t understand), for example, in this web sites I can see documental videos, like the(ww) Geography, or Nature, Animals, of the Earth, etc., and I funny (we)(and it is funny to me, and I can learn…) and I learn of didactic form.

One link that I like much is http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=buj9MS8cxcg , this video show the biggest lakes in the North of America or other video would be http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oLDI68bA7pU, which shows the earth without humans, or videos about end the world. Because I like see fantastic videos, and this videos are in this sites.

Other thing that I like do in these sites is see, listen and learn to music, because as well of I see videos I can listen and read the subtitles of the music, for example   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=phbM3DdRgd0  , I like much this song, or these http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIwqzfjI3z8&feature=related, whit this videos, I can learn more about the English, and result more easy for me (because) I (can) understand the songs.

I consider important that the tools of internet for the spare time are very necessary, because the people can learn, see videos, listen music, see movies, and much other thing interesting(we) (interesting’s things).  

I put with color red the things that I think are bad, and well I don’t speak English so well, so is probably that the things that I said, are be totally wrong!

To next, I must be evaluate the style of Tamara’s blog. So first!, the title is good, very functional, the people know who she are, and this is good. Emm the number of post is amazing; she has realized all blogs of the last year and this year. Very responsible!

About extra features, I don’t’ know what is that, I think that are links or something rare things, however, her blog is very normal, it’s don’t have any so much stranger things, and this is good. The design is great, the wallpaper is wonderful, and the styles of the letters and post, fit perfectly.

She put images and videos in any post that she has, and it have really nice pictures, I liked so much one of her pictures in the south. She really saw wonderful landscapes.

And well, the types of comments are…. I don’t know, very nicely.

Ok this is all for today, se you latter. Bye!

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